[LDROWN]

The paper I am writing is for my college english comp I class is about my first trackday. Not sure what to title it. I was thinking, "Becoming a Knee Dragger". Was wondering if anyone out there has any other suggestions. Here is the paper. Its not to long. Only about 695 words. Thanks for reading. Hope you enjoy it.

 

[mikespike2]

Just some other tips.. no title for you:

You should probably have it MLA formatted, which includes being double spaced and have 1" margins, header, etc.

Not sure if you haven't done that part yet but I want you to get it right before you turn it in ;-)

 

[mikespike2]

Are you open to editing and corrections as well? Or are you happy with it? (I'm a perfectionist).

Title options I got so far, may be cheezy:
"A Day at the Track"
"My First Track Day"
"The Ride of a Life"

 

[alaska cajun]

Call it "My passion,My life"

 

[LDROWN]

I am open to every kind of suggestions. The professor wanted it single spaced block format. So that I can not change. He also said I couldn't use the word "you", I was going to title it "A Day at the Track" then thought about "Dragging A Knee" then the other one. He said the title shoudl be evocative.

 

[slvrblckrr]

There's a couple grammatical errors in it then can be caught by simply proof reading it.
As for a title, just go with what comes to mind. That's how i usually do it.
My english teacher is tired of hearing me write about cars and motorcycles. I'm working on my senior thesis now and trying to somehow come up with a subject not related to motorcycles. All i want to do is review gear

 

[LDROWN]

So what are the errors I need to fix??

 

[LEWNITIC]

"Kneedraggers Paradise."
"Kneedragging: Joining the Revolution"

I dunno. I almost flunked HS because of English.

 

[LDROWN]

Yeah me too... Thanks for the suggestions.

 

[rykid]

put some more word to discribe things in there!!

 

[LDROWN]

I would but the professor said it needs to be only 500 words, and doesn't want too much more. I am at 695 now.

 

[exo600]

I didn't read it (no time now) but you could call it "Life @ 120mph" or "One day at Full Speed" or "My Day at the Track", that last one is kind of cheeseball tho.



Edit: I read it now.

 

[LDROWN]

Hmm.... All good. Thanks for the suggestions.

 

[knuckledragger]

title it "Quasi Moto" (almost dead) since racing/riding is living on the edge.